After my critique, I decided to have a think about the number and order of my pages. I want to show Haroun meeting Butt the Hoopoe, Haroun and Iff flying to the moon Kahani, and the realisation that Kahani is a water moon. I do not think I will be able to complete this in 5 pages however so I will have to go over the required amount.
Page 1 - Haroun looks at the moon Kahani and longs to travel there. Iff has a trick up his sleeve, and presents Haroun with his hand.
Page 2 - In Iff's hand are lots of tiny birds among other magical creatures, and Iff tells Haroun to choose one.
Page 3 - Haroun thinks, and chooses the Hoopoe.
Page 4 - Iff throws the miniature Hoopoe out the window, and it magically grows in size!
Page 5 - Haroun and Iff ride Butt the mechanical Hoopoe to the Moon Kahani.
Page 6 - They land on the water of the moon Kahani.
Page 7 - Haroun is surprised to see that the moon is made of water!
These will be the themes of the pages that I will be creating for my final piece.
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